Presentation From HAKA community |
After the opening speech, we continued our event with presentation from
each country. I wont tell you about the all the events because I think it will
be a very long story. I will only tell you about the presentation and
performance that impressed me. The first presentation was from HAKA community
in Surabaya named Hwie Tiauw Ka community. From that presentation, I learn a
lot about Chinese people. Therefore I’m Chinese, I didn’t know a lot about Chinese
people. Many chinese now days don’t know how to speak Chinese language moreover
write the Chinese letters, like me. I even didn’t have a chinese name. But HAKA
people keep maintaining their culture, many of them speak chinese fluently. They
taught us how to make a lampion from “Ang Pao” and how to make a calligraphy in
their stand.
Salsa Permormance from Salsa Commuity |
The next one is a performance from Spain. They invited a dancer from Salsa
Community. The dancer taught us how to dance basic salsa. I was so impressesd
by the Salsa dance because I have seen many great salsa dancer in Bali and I
had an opportunity to learn a little bit salsa dance last year. They told us to
come infront to dance salsa and you know that time I was forget about my
shyness and came to the stage. The music began and all the people in the stage
began to dance. The first song was “Baliando” by Enrique Iglesias. And I also
saw Mr. Hadi came to stage and danced salsa. It was so fun because I never seen
he danced salsa before.
Overall this event was fun and entertain me. Nevertheless I couldn’t tell
the all event, I really enjoyed the event. And the most important things is from
that event I got many new knowledge about language, culture, etc. I also
practiced my listening skill because the MC as well as several presentator
speak English. I think EDSA should held this event again next year.
It is just a little story from the event. During the presentation, I saw
two high school students was studying. They opened their book and began to
solve math in their book. And that time I taugh, how diligent they are. or they just got bored with the event? I don't know. But I keep wondered, they should be studious students!
Hello Tyta,
ReplyDeleteI think your writing was detailed and it was written in a chronological order. I like the fact that you describe the whole event in general. However, you told the readers the detailed of your favorite presentations and performances. Just for suggestions, it might be good if you try to find other vocabulary to use in your word. In first line of the second paragraph, you wrote “The event is opened by dance performance …” should it be “was” instead of “is”. The second sentence in the fifth paragraph is not clear to me, what do you mean by “Nevertheless I couldn’t tell the all event, I really enjoy the event.”? Other than that, you have done a great job.
I think so about the Salsa dance Tyt. However, i can't dance at all :)
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